There is a City far away (17th June 2016)

There is a City far away (17th June 2016)


Nice theme

Some good ideas here. An engaging melody with supportive harmony and light touches of counterpoint. Good job. The first several bars need more dynamics and fluidity/legato. Notes are too even. Part of the problem is the lack of expression in your virtual instrument. I am sure a "real" performance would breath more life into this piece. It would be less "hurdy-gurdy."

Richard Schletty | Schletty Design and Music |

Re: Nice Theme

Hello! Thank you for the feedback as always! Yes, human voices singing this hymn will definitely bring out the required 'flow' that is not captured by the virtual instruments in this rendering. 

To God, Glory; to man, none.

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