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In a Son Kind of way – options for lyrics
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Through the gifting of His Son
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Through the giving of His Son
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The gift of His Son to us all
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His Son lights the way
I like the song. Needs a bit of tweaking as far as prosody. Here are my suggestions:
Oh, where would we be had not a savior been born
On that wonderful Christmas morning?
No prophecies fulfilled, no hope of redemption,
No Christmas hymns to sing.
Chorus:
But the guiding star has filled the night!
The shepherds knelt down at the stall.
The Father above has blessed us with love:
The gift of His Son to us all.
And who could have taken your place long ago
On a cross for the sake of our sins?
Oh, where would we be without the precious babe
Who showed us the way to forgive?
Chorus:
Yes, the guiding star has filled the night!
Life everlasting is our call.
The Father above has blessed us with love:
The gift of His Son to us all.
The gift of His Son to us all.
Richard Schletty | Schletty Design and Music | www.schletty.com
Prosody
WHERE WOULD WE BE?
TITLE: WHERE WOULD WE BE?
Maybe repeat with
Oh tell me where would we be?
Could also say
The work has been done instead of new life has been won.
God's leading for you John.
Thanks
Good Song
But the Father above has blessed us with love, with the gift of His Son Christmas day
Rewrite of song
Ooh fun...a CONTEST